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The Unwanted Writings

The DP tags your poetry "inappropriate". So what are you gonna do? You can't just let your words go unsaid! So, you put it down here, at The Unwanted Writings. This is where Edgar Allen Poe, Walt Whitman, and many other famous poets would have gone, their poetry deemed "inappropriate". Maybe you're just tired of having to resubmit your poetry so many times, because it seems that no matter how much you study it and look over it, it never goes with the Holy Format.
Whatever your reason, I hope you have found the place to put your poetry where others may enjoy it.

(Yes, there a some rules)

1. This not the place to put hate poetry, or poetry that is way too sexualy explicit.

2. Please try not to put in poetry that has a large amount of expletives. A few are alright, just not three or four every line.

3. Put the title at the beginning and the author at the end, and try to use as the best grammar you can. Go by what others have, but other than that, there's no format.

4. Also, make sure to put your poem at the end of the page. Thanks!

Ok, I've decided to put some "polishers" up here. Polisher is a person who fixes the lower case, emboldens things, adds (') those, etc. Polishers have to be on alot, and the reasons I have their names up here is so that if they accidentally mess your poem up, you can talk to them about it and get it fixed. I'm not in need of any polishers, but who knows when I will be? Here they are, anyway:

[Your Favorite Stranger]
If your poem has been messed up, just give one of us a yell!

That said, write away!

Woo i'm soo honoured to be the first person on here!

My Family Portrait

Daddy brought a gun home today
He said he wouldn't use it.
He said that mommy broke his heart
He said she abused it.
And daddy said his life is over.

Daddy and mommy gave me Ella.
Last night daddy told us we were going to take a bath
But daddy just stood there touching us.
Ella cried but daddy laughed.

Daddy took Ella to the living room.
He told her to lie down.
Daddy unzipped his pants,
Ella started to frown.
Ella screamed.

I ran to Daddy's study
And rumaged through his stuff.
I worried about what he'd say,
He hasn't hit me enough.
Daddy never smiles anymore though.

I found the gun in daddy's drawer.
It was dark and shiny and big,
But i heard Ella screaming my name so I ran.
Daddy's gun was dangerous
But it would fix everything.

Suddenly I heard Daddy shouting naughty words
That he used to call my mommy.
I ran into the room but Ella was naked.
She started crying and ran to me
But daddy had a knife.

But daddy walked towards El
Holding it in his hand.
And Ella ran towards me
But daddy still screamed his demand.
He told her to lie down but she kept going.

I didnt like the way daddy was acting.
He wasn't normally like this.
He loved me, El and mommy so much
I wanted to shoot but I'd miss.
So i took El to the kitchen.

I sat her on the worktop
And told her not to worry.
"Soon Daddy will be gone
But he's really really sorry
That he hurt you El."

I went back to Daddy.
I saw him sitting and crying.
He saw the gun I was holding
And he said he was sorry
But I knew he was lying.

I went up to Daddy and stood up tall
And so,
I whispered the words "I'm sorry Daddy
You have to go."
And Daddy fell to the ground.


Dirty Girl

Dirty girl, on the street.
To make her trip you stick out your feet.
There she goes, watch her fall,
Run away as she cracks her skull.
Naive strangers, telling me
They let her go, in death's she free.
Telling lies to pass the time,
Letting smack tell them it's fine.
Chain reaction, here we go.
The cops are coming; quick, let's go.
Every man for their own lives,
Everyone's living a lie.
Smokers watching me,
They only pretend to be free.
I hold the truth, I've got the light.
No one's all right in nobody's sight.
Dirty girl was on the street
The smokers were watching me.
To make her trip, I stuck out my feet.
I let her go, in death she's free.



You start getting tired,
struggling for breath,
The pain creeps up,
and worsens the stress.

Life deteriorates
before your eyes.
The pain creeps up,
for all your lies.

The destruction starts,
to take its toll.
The pain creeps up,
and eats your soul.

You find a gun,
pointed at your head.
The pain creeps up,
and leaves you dead.

Written by [tenshi-ryuu]


What do you see, eyes, what do you see?
Are you thinking when you are looking at me-
A chubby girl, panties all in a bunch,
The quiet kid who sits with outcasts at lunch,
Who’s the girl with whom you’d rather be friends,
When you know because of you her faith in god will soon end,
Who seems to look over the signals you send,
And forever is nothing more than a friend,
Who now has cancer because of the choices you made,
Whose glances you dodge until her face fades.
Is that what you’re thinking? Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes world,

I’ll tell you who I am, as I walk my slow pace,
As I am surrounded by people who don’t see my face:
I’m a person with feelings that are yet to be felt,
Because it seems no romantic cards have been dealt;
A twinkle of hope is still in here somewhere,
A sought after light that I treat with great care;
A time son will come when that light will go out,
A time in the near future, I hold no doubt;
At my place, now I have the bottom rung to myself,
It’s a position I relish, but it’s my own little shelf,
A veteran at irony, a master of desire,
I hope that my twinkle will one day be fire.

written by [angrybuddhas.]

That Instant

As I wait to cross the street
I see the “walk” sign blink.

Although I've heard of drunk-driver deaths
I still don't stop to think.

I take some steps into the street
And hear a sudden screech.

Next thing I know I'm stuck to steel
Like some blood-sucking leech.

In that instant I didn't stop to think
About the horrid consequences of taking just one drink.

Then my life flashed before my eyes
In just one sudden thought.

All the moments good and bad
That every day had brought.

I hear paramedics saying
Prayers under their breath.

But that Instant of carelessness
Brought me to my death.

         Written by [Moving on in Life]

I Did

Went to a party
heres what they said
have a drink
just one drink
so i did

started dancing
drinking hard
someone passed me a pill
told me to take it
so i did

loopied up
having fun
saw the bowl
they said hit it once
so i did

a few more hits
a ton more drinks
i saw the line
they said snort it
so i did

trippin hard
seeing stars
saw the boy
he said come to my car
so i did

sweaty bodies
empty minds
the condom tore
he said dont care
so i didn't

nine months later
can't see my feet
swelled so big
im paying the price
for what i did

took the gun
wrote the note
but it to my head
blew the hole
now im dead

        Written by [evil penguin]

The other side

A bully once came up to me
 Came up to me and said

"Give me all your lunch money,
 Or I'll lodge my fist inside your head"

In shock and awe and horrendous fear
 I forked over all my cash

I couldn't help but ask myself
 "why was he so harsh?"

Now I stand, just right here
 Down an empty hall

With someone's colloar in my fist,
 And his back against the wall

One side tells me to beat him up
 Because that's half the fun

But the other side screams
 "drop him! Just drop the kid and run!"

SO quickly I make a simple choice,
 As I lower him to the ground

I let him go and watch him run
 Because a new path I have found

         Written by [Moving on in Life]


Wherefore art thou, oh my love?
No one knows.
Except to say thou aren't at home.
I gasp then run;
'Tis as I feared;
Thou hadst spoken of thy death as it neared.
I run; I stumble, I trip and fall,
But knowing i must get to thee above all
Driveth me onward, maketh me take
Desperate measures to follow in thy wake.
I know where to find thee,
Thou explained it quite clear,
How to get from here to there.
And so I ran, with heart beating,
Legs flying, I ran to the place i knew thou i would'st find.
And find thee I did: thy silent deed was done:
Thou layest quite cold in a puddle of blood.
I threw myself down, pulled thee into my arms,
Crying and sobbing and kissing thee hard.
But nothing happened, twas all for naught:
Thy beautiful soul, Death's minions had caught.
I looked down at mine body, covered with thy own life,
Inspired by thought, I searched for the knife
That had stabbed my love's heart.
I clutched it, then whispered, "I come where thou art."
So saying, I plunged the knife deep.
A moment of pain, then I fell in a heap.
The last moments of my life, my end of the race,
But it was soon over and I was greeted by thy face.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Broken Mirror

I look into my mirror
And she stares back at me.
Long we glare at one another;
No end is close to see.

Who's eyes within this face are set?
Who's hair of golden hue?
Who's tears are these that stream
From eyes of darkest blue?

Who's face is this, so very sad?
Who's eyes with shadows wrought?
Who's brows now crease together
With every weary thought?

I smile at this stranger,
Conjured from out my mind.
To my surprise, she smiles back;
At least she has the time.

I laugh aloud, and so does she,
'Tis like we're both the same,
Soon I find myself wondering
'Does she maybe have a name?'

We start off simply looking,
And then we get to talking,
Soon, we do it everyday;
I before the mirror stalking.

I stare into the mirror;
But not her face I see:
Instead, there is a demon there,
Reaching out for me.

I try to run away,
But the demon from the mirror
Follows, grabbing for me,
Its hands are getting nearer.

I get a close up view of it,
And to my horror find
The face it wears upon its head
Is nothing less than mine!

Terrified beyond all words,
I look, and pray to find
Something with which to break
The mirror, left behind.

A book, it is my saviour!
I throw it at the glass,
The demon- now it shatters,
Upon the lively-hood of my past.

I fall with it to the floor,
I share this demon's pain.
Horrified, I realize
All my efforts were in vain:

The mirror held the image
Of what I had become.-
My mind now oh so broken-
My body begins to numb.

I stare blindly at the mirror,
Now shattered on the floor,
Millions of tiny images
Of what is never more.

            Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]


I stare into the mirror
Eyes of deep brown look back
Shadows pain in blood all behinde them
Like glass holding in an ocean
Of crimsion red and blue
No one knows what I've seen no not even you
I've told all my secrets and then a little more
But still you dont know what lies behinde the door
The door that leads into me
Like a rotten apple core
Slowly ripping apart my insides
Making me all torn
Cries and sobs escape me
In the darkest night
I think that I'm Alright
But we all know im not
Im destrought with thoughts of death
Losing my last breath
Horror pain and murder are in my little world
Twist and turning mixing together in a whirl
No one knows whats happening in my little mind
No one trys to find out by being oh so kind
As to cut open my head
Lay upon my corpse
Kill me on the bed
See the crimson blood ive shed
And whisper sweet words into my ear
Kiss away the tears from blank eyes staring
No one even caring
That as you pleasure your self
I'm already dead
On the inside no one sees
That im not who you think
I'm gone from this world
My body begans to stink
Try to wash me clean in your perfect porcelain sink
But my Hands wont wash clean of this blood
That you lowered on me
From a knife so keen to your senses
No one even saw
The terror in my eyes
But its ok
Because soon youll be found
And my body rest in peace

       Written by [Ego Diligo Tu]


Every morning I am thanking my stars
Feel so lucky having you in my arms
Wouldn't be the same without you,babe
There's not a thing about you I would change
I'm incomplete when you're far away
And when you're here,you make me whole again
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I foud someone who will make me say this and mean it.

Couldn't imagine life without you,
I want to wrap my arms around you
You're like a miracle in the month of March
I just want to kiss your face.

Sometimes I have to stop and stare
Might even run my fingers through your hair
Just to see that this is not a dream
I've got to see you smiling back at me
And I'm okay as long as you're okay
Don't have to ask, I know you feel the same
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I found someone who could make me say this and mean it.

       Written by [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]

Tribute to our Armed Forces

From Pearl Harbor
To Iraq

On us they
Haven't turned their back.

Fighting all night
And fighting all day

Struggling under fire
To keep hostiles at bay.

Fighting for freedom
to uphold all our rights.

Yet when they come home
They hide from "The Lights".

They don't ask for fortune
And they don't ask for fame

Because while they're out there
They all share the same name.

So this is my tribute
For Honor's the call

For the men and women
Who ask for nothing at all.

©2005 Brandon Aaron Bessman

Written by [Moving on in Life]

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2006-07-02 [Moving on in Life]: Why you lookin lonely?

2006-07-02 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *tilts head to side curiously* yeah liz, you just had a lick fest with terini.

2006-07-02 [Ego Diligo Tu]: One lick isnt a fest and cuz im mad at my sister for killing the battery on my cell phone...

2006-07-02 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i know, i just thought about that. ohh, i got it....cell phone batteries are really irritating. can't you use a house phone?

2006-07-02 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Well not for long distance and plus tis cuz she didnt ask...

2006-07-02 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Oh, well that's the crap. For your cell? Grr.

2006-07-02 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Yeah I was like jesus get off you supid *(&^&^%$#$ you know and then more of the *&&$#^^@##&&^$@#%^^&&^%$#$%^&*&*^&%$#$%^&*(^%$#@#$%$^&*

2006-07-02 [Moving on in Life]: So, do you WANT a lick fest? ;)

2006-07-03 [Linderel]: Hear, hear! Springing forth with a challenge, the admins at Solemn Lines have decided to bring all poetry communities of Elftown together in a tournament of skill. During July, members of each community that answers our call will choose a representative among themselves - the procedure for that will be up to you, but make sure that come August, you're all ready to roll and cheer your champion on. Get ready, ladies and gentlemen, for the World Cup of Poetry, hosted by Solemn Lines!

2006-07-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *licks hime on the cheek* depends what does it consit of?

2006-07-03 [Moving on in Life]: *licks her on the nose* It's a competition. I don't put my poetry up for competition.

2006-07-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *watches the licking nostalgically* Hmm, depends on whether it's a competition for the community, or individuals. I'll ask him, have fun you two...

2006-07-04 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites and giggles and licks his neck where i bit him* i won

2006-07-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Okay, it's for both, that's what I've been told. Liz, or Terini, has it snatched any interest? Terini, I know you don't put up poetry for competition, but if it's for a wiki, is that any different?

2006-07-04 [Ego Diligo Tu]: I guess i could try and scratch something out of this rotten little mind of mine.

2006-07-05 [Moving on in Life]: Not for me. I like to be judged, but not for prizes

2006-07-05 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *nibbles terini ear*

2006-07-05 [Moving on in Life]: *nibbles back lightly, then licks Ego's nose*

2006-07-05 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles*

2006-07-05 [Moving on in Life]: *nibbles Ego'*

2006-07-06 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites back and giggles* so mister Army of one what are you and army of one for?

2006-07-06 [Moving on in Life]: It's not me. Both of my brothers just went Active Duty. So I'm supporting em from here

2006-07-06 [Moving on in Life]: I don't wanna nibbvle your lip too much. Might lead to some dirtier things.

2006-07-06 [~devils_child~]: hi peopels

2006-07-07 [Moving on in Life]: Hi, Devil

2006-07-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *glares at devil* grr, you just interrupted their nibbling gets real interesting sometimes! Also, terini, now i can't call you terini anymore!! And good luck to your bros, they have my support too

2006-07-07 [Moving on in Life]: You can still call me Terini! Cause that's who I are!

2006-07-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Oh goodie! Cause you jsut seem like a Terini kind of person!

2006-07-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Ok, here's my plan, see if you agree: For that contest thingy, I'm thinking of Elfmailing anyone who has more than one poem on here, asking them if they want to try out for it. We make a contest page, then you two and me can judge for the top 5, or w/e # we want. Then, we poll it. nly problem with that is, we couldn't enter. Crap. *goes to rethink*

2006-07-08 [Moving on in Life]: I"m sure I could cough up one of my not-so-important poems on here...although they all mean something to me...

2006-07-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Yay! Would you?

2006-07-08 [Moving on in Life]: I guess. Just tell me where to post it and I'll see if I can't find one.

2006-07-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: uhhh...*is going to be busy creating the page*...

2006-07-08 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *nibbles brandons (shock a name) chin* how bout that?

2006-07-08 [Moving on in Life]: *nibbles back* hehe

2006-07-14 [dragonlette]: ok how do i umm add a peom?

2006-07-14 [Linderel]: Um, excuse me. There's a typo in that link, it's supposed to be The Unwanted Writings Poetry Contest. :> Just saying that in case someone didn't notice it yet. <_<

2006-07-15 [Moving on in Life]: ok thanks :)

2006-07-15 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *licks brandon*

2006-07-15 [Moving on in Life]: *licks back, all over her body*

2006-07-15 [Ego Diligo Tu]: bad brandon behave!!!\

2006-07-16 [Moving on in Life]: I'll try *evil grin*

2006-07-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: shhh

2006-07-17 [Moving on in Life]: ok, I'll be quiet

2006-07-17 [Ego Diligo Tu]: no no ou can talk*giggles*

2006-07-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *walks over to girls* this is starting to sound like a porno...

2006-07-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: Nut uh!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

2006-07-18 [Moving on in Life]: It'll go somethng like this if its a porno..*whips out his massive <steak knife>* :P just kiddin. I'll be clean

2006-07-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: no its the porn thats not a porn he whips out his massive bannana and feeds it to the crazy monkeys at the zoo

2006-07-18 [Moving on in Life]: lol

2006-07-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: LOL why steak knife by the way?

2006-07-18 [Moving on in Life]: I dunno. That was the first thing that came to mind.

2006-07-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: But that would be pointed and ow!

2006-07-18 [Moving on in Life]: lol

2006-07-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: You stay now right brandon?

2006-07-19 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *falls out of chair laughing* you guys kill me

2006-07-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: bleh

2006-07-19 [Moving on in Life]: YOu know I can't stay on often :(

2006-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: it makes me sad

2006-07-20 [Moving on in Life]: But I'm here now! For a while! Cause it's later in the day

2006-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: ya sure

2006-07-20 [Moving on in Life]: We just can't seem to get on at the same time! LOL

2006-07-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: its your fault*crys*

2006-07-21 [Moving on in Life]: No, it's not!

2006-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *crys*

2006-07-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *doesn't know who to hug first* liz it ain't his fault...*hugs liz, then hugs terini*

2006-07-22 [Moving on in Life]: *hugs back*

2006-07-22 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *still crys*

2006-07-22 [Moving on in Life]: *hugs Ego*

2006-07-22 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *crys on brandon*

2006-07-23 [Moving on in Life]: There there...Don't cry anymore.

2006-07-23 [Bessman]: I'm gunna slap you, Brandon.

2006-07-23 [Moving on in Life]: Not if I slap you first! *slap*

2006-07-23 [Bessman]: I'm gunna start introducing myself as "the good looking brother"

2006-07-23 [Moving on in Life]: And I'll introduce myself as "Smarter than you"

2006-07-23 [Bessman]: ....just cause you spell better.....

2006-07-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks at newcomer* dont slap the brandon...

2006-07-23 [Bessman]: He cant stop me. *flexes* cause i'm bigger and better looking. *cheers*

2006-07-23 [Moving on in Life]: And don't flex at my Ego *growls*

2006-07-23 [Bessman]: You think I'll remember to get on here after i get back?

2006-07-23 [Moving on in Life]: Let's hope so. These people will learn to love you in the day you got left before you ship out :D

2006-07-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hides under a table* eep flexi muscles...can i touch them?

2006-07-23 [Moving on in Life]: If he says so. *cowers behind himself*

2006-07-23 [Bessman]: Touch away.....but i must ask.....why so jittery?

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks and pokes and runs away* ahhhhh ze muscles are twitchay!

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: You know you like em. *winks*

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites muscels*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: WoW. A feisty one. Hmm.....

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: hmm?

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Hmm.

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: Already hittin on someone LOL

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Cause its me. You should know me Brandon.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *feels ignored and crys* im attetion starved you should fawn over me

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I dont belive I was ignoring you.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *crys*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: *pat, pat* There there.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites muscles again*

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: You hush, I give you attention all the time

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: so? I like it! it makes me feels special! if you dont wanna i coudl just go away to someother place

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: I didn't say I'd stop, just don't say yu're attention starved :P

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pouts* okay fine im not but umm cant i pretend?

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I'll humor you.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: yay!*waits for the attention*

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: *smothers Ego wih Attention* There . Now I gotta go for a bit.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: is your brother staying? you both cant leave!!

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I'll still give you the attention you deserve.....after i shower.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: but but but but but stay now pwease? shower later? pwease?

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Make it worth the wait?

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: promise

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: ok. I'm still here then. All ears.....and eyes....and stuff.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: and fingers..for typing

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Yeah yeah....for typing...yeah thats right.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: yup

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: My fingers are available...not for typing, though ;)\

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Shuddup

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: hehe am i getting argued over?

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Maybe. You dont deserve it?

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: That mean!

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I was asking if you thought you didnt deserve it. Thats why there is a question mark there.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: oh i dont know do i?

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I think you

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bounces* yay!

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I'm new on how do I get more people to notice my house?

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: You umm wait?

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: You just sit and.....hope people come along?

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: yeah pretty much

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Well......*waits........and waits............and waits...........and............* It isnt WORKING!!!

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: give it time. why do you want them to notice?

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Cause I'm an attention freak! I have to try to win everyones attention all the time. Its just me.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks* but then what attention would i get if you took it all? you better share

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: No!

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pouts and gets teary eyed. runs to corner curls and bawl and crys quietly*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: *grins* Dont you run away from me!

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hides in ball*

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: *steps to the side of Bessman, letting him chase her*

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *is frightened*

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: *steps to the side of Bessman, letting him chase her*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: DOUBLE POST!!!!!  Dumb shit.....

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hides more*

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: *poofs invisible* haha you can't see me

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: *pokes you in the eyes* Now you cant see me either.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits on bess's lap*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Well hello. *winks*

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: hi!*hugs*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: How are you? *initiates meaningless conversation protocals*

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites earlobe*

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: That's just wrong. You're gonna him put in prison. Then he WON'T be able to join the army!

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hides against bess*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I quote the great.....myself.  "They cant catch us all!"

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles* your jsut jealous brandon here ill go sit onyoru lap

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: Bess last time you said that, YOU were the ONLY one they caught

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits in between both of you*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: oh yeah. You can keep her. *winks*

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pouts* You give up easy

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: haha

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits on brandons lap*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: Ask Brandon if i can beat the hell out of him or not.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *looks at brandon for an answer*

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: *thinks a second* Not no, but HELL NO

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I'll beat you up when i feel like it.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks* bess your brothers an ass

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: Fine then *cries*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: *pats Brandon, then bitchslaps him* Real men dont cry!

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites hard on bass shoulder trying to get him to cry*

2006-07-24 [Moving on in Life]: *runs away CRYING*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: I dont cry. I'll bleed before i cry.

2006-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites harder on your shoulder drawing blood*

2006-07-24 [Bessman]: *looks down at the bleeding shoulder* Owie!!

2006-07-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *keeps biting waiting for tears*

2006-07-25 [Moving on in Life]: It aint gonna happen. He don't cry

2006-07-25 [Bessman]: *smiles* hehe

2006-07-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pulls back and pouts*

2006-07-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: * pulls terini into lap and holds protectively, wiping away bis tears* real men cry, and i don't know you and you hurt terini, after all the times i've patched him up (that was terini right?) i don't think i like you *glares* mean ppl make me mad

2006-07-29 [Moving on in Life]: (Yep, it's MEEEEE) *sniffles* Yeah, You're my hero still *grins* It's been FOREVER!

2006-07-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *hands you hanky* Good, it makes me feel very usefull, and stuff. It most certainly has been forever! Which is kinda a good thing...Anything I can do for you know?

2006-07-31 [Moving on in Life]: Unless you can come to where I live and give me a REAL hug, Then no. haha...

2006-08-02 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *dances*

2006-08-02 [Moving on in Life]: *dances alone* yaya!

2006-08-02 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sleeps*

2006-08-03 [Moving on in Life]: *makes pretty drawings on your face while you sleep* haha

2006-08-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *opens eyes and crys from being drawn on* no

2006-08-03 [Moving on in Life]: I'm evil..oh yeah.

2006-08-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hides and cries*

2006-08-04 [Moving on in Life]: I'll lick it all off for you, if you like! *winks*

2006-08-04 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *crys*

2006-08-04 [Moving on in Life]: Oh, don't cry. you cry too much.

2006-08-04 [Ego Diligo Tu]: i know...its ccuz umm no one likes me

2006-08-05 [Moving on in Life]: I like you. Bessman said he'd send you a letter, so Mleh :P

2006-08-05 [Ego Diligo Tu]: I see... hmmm...intresting

2006-08-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ...ok, just on the topic of...w/e. i heard the worst thing the other was bad and funny at the same time. i got a little mad. but here goes, laugh or be mad "I wish my grass was emo so it'd cut itself". Yesh. In case no one else has noticed, cutting is the newest fab, everyone who's anyone is doing it, just "to be cool" as I heard one girl say. *shakes head sadly* what's this country coming too when you can't even cut yourself without being conformist...

2006-08-05 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pats jamie* itll be okay

2006-08-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *pouts, then trips on lower lip* owwie

2006-08-05 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *huggles*

2006-08-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *is ok* i love huggles/hugs

2006-08-05 [Ego Diligo Tu]: i know lol

2006-08-05 [Moving on in Life]: You stole that off of my bro's page!! [Bessman] ish my bro... >.>

2006-08-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: hUh? Who are you talking to???

2006-08-06 [Moving on in Life]: You! You stole the "I wish my grass was Emo" comment :P...ok, not really, I know. I'm just rambling stupidly. ignore me for now.

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