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The Unwanted Writings

The DP tags your poetry "inappropriate". So what are you gonna do? You can't just let your words go unsaid! So, you put it down here, at The Unwanted Writings. This is where Edgar Allen Poe, Walt Whitman, and many other famous poets would have gone, their poetry deemed "inappropriate". Maybe you're just tired of having to resubmit your poetry so many times, because it seems that no matter how much you study it and look over it, it never goes with the Holy Format.
Whatever your reason, I hope you have found the place to put your poetry where others may enjoy it.

(Yes, there a some rules)

1. This not the place to put hate poetry, or poetry that is way too sexualy explicit.

2. Please try not to put in poetry that has a large amount of expletives. A few are alright, just not three or four every line.

3. Put the title at the beginning and the author at the end, and try to use as the best grammar you can. Go by what others have, but other than that, there's no format.

4. Also, make sure to put your poem at the end of the page. Thanks!

Ok, I've decided to put some "polishers" up here. Polisher is a person who fixes the lower case, emboldens things, adds (') those, etc. Polishers have to be on alot, and the reasons I have their names up here is so that if they accidentally mess your poem up, you can talk to them about it and get it fixed. I'm not in need of any polishers, but who knows when I will be? Here they are, anyway:

[Your Favorite Stranger]
If your poem has been messed up, just give one of us a yell!

That said, write away!

Woo i'm soo honoured to be the first person on here!

My Family Portrait

Daddy brought a gun home today
He said he wouldn't use it.
He said that mommy broke his heart
He said she abused it.
And daddy said his life is over.

Daddy and mommy gave me Ella.
Last night daddy told us we were going to take a bath
But daddy just stood there touching us.
Ella cried but daddy laughed.

Daddy took Ella to the living room.
He told her to lie down.
Daddy unzipped his pants,
Ella started to frown.
Ella screamed.

I ran to Daddy's study
And rumaged through his stuff.
I worried about what he'd say,
He hasn't hit me enough.
Daddy never smiles anymore though.

I found the gun in daddy's drawer.
It was dark and shiny and big,
But i heard Ella screaming my name so I ran.
Daddy's gun was dangerous
But it would fix everything.

Suddenly I heard Daddy shouting naughty words
That he used to call my mommy.
I ran into the room but Ella was naked.
She started crying and ran to me
But daddy had a knife.

But daddy walked towards El
Holding it in his hand.
And Ella ran towards me
But daddy still screamed his demand.
He told her to lie down but she kept going.

I didnt like the way daddy was acting.
He wasn't normally like this.
He loved me, El and mommy so much
I wanted to shoot but I'd miss.
So i took El to the kitchen.

I sat her on the worktop
And told her not to worry.
"Soon Daddy will be gone
But he's really really sorry
That he hurt you El."

I went back to Daddy.
I saw him sitting and crying.
He saw the gun I was holding
And he said he was sorry
But I knew he was lying.

I went up to Daddy and stood up tall
And so,
I whispered the words "I'm sorry Daddy
You have to go."
And Daddy fell to the ground.


Dirty Girl

Dirty girl, on the street.
To make her trip you stick out your feet.
There she goes, watch her fall,
Run away as she cracks her skull.
Naive strangers, telling me
They let her go, in death's she free.
Telling lies to pass the time,
Letting smack tell them it's fine.
Chain reaction, here we go.
The cops are coming; quick, let's go.
Every man for their own lives,
Everyone's living a lie.
Smokers watching me,
They only pretend to be free.
I hold the truth, I've got the light.
No one's all right in nobody's sight.
Dirty girl was on the street
The smokers were watching me.
To make her trip, I stuck out my feet.
I let her go, in death she's free.



You start getting tired,
struggling for breath,
The pain creeps up,
and worsens the stress.

Life deteriorates
before your eyes.
The pain creeps up,
for all your lies.

The destruction starts,
to take its toll.
The pain creeps up,
and eats your soul.

You find a gun,
pointed at your head.
The pain creeps up,
and leaves you dead.

Written by [tenshi-ryuu]


What do you see, eyes, what do you see?
Are you thinking when you are looking at me-
A chubby girl, panties all in a bunch,
The quiet kid who sits with outcasts at lunch,
Who’s the girl with whom you’d rather be friends,
When you know because of you her faith in god will soon end,
Who seems to look over the signals you send,
And forever is nothing more than a friend,
Who now has cancer because of the choices you made,
Whose glances you dodge until her face fades.
Is that what you’re thinking? Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes world,

I’ll tell you who I am, as I walk my slow pace,
As I am surrounded by people who don’t see my face:
I’m a person with feelings that are yet to be felt,
Because it seems no romantic cards have been dealt;
A twinkle of hope is still in here somewhere,
A sought after light that I treat with great care;
A time son will come when that light will go out,
A time in the near future, I hold no doubt;
At my place, now I have the bottom rung to myself,
It’s a position I relish, but it’s my own little shelf,
A veteran at irony, a master of desire,
I hope that my twinkle will one day be fire.

written by [angrybuddhas.]

That Instant

As I wait to cross the street
I see the “walk” sign blink.

Although I've heard of drunk-driver deaths
I still don't stop to think.

I take some steps into the street
And hear a sudden screech.

Next thing I know I'm stuck to steel
Like some blood-sucking leech.

In that instant I didn't stop to think
About the horrid consequences of taking just one drink.

Then my life flashed before my eyes
In just one sudden thought.

All the moments good and bad
That every day had brought.

I hear paramedics saying
Prayers under their breath.

But that Instant of carelessness
Brought me to my death.

         Written by [Moving on in Life]

I Did

Went to a party
heres what they said
have a drink
just one drink
so i did

started dancing
drinking hard
someone passed me a pill
told me to take it
so i did

loopied up
having fun
saw the bowl
they said hit it once
so i did

a few more hits
a ton more drinks
i saw the line
they said snort it
so i did

trippin hard
seeing stars
saw the boy
he said come to my car
so i did

sweaty bodies
empty minds
the condom tore
he said dont care
so i didn't

nine months later
can't see my feet
swelled so big
im paying the price
for what i did

took the gun
wrote the note
but it to my head
blew the hole
now im dead

        Written by [evil penguin]

The other side

A bully once came up to me
 Came up to me and said

"Give me all your lunch money,
 Or I'll lodge my fist inside your head"

In shock and awe and horrendous fear
 I forked over all my cash

I couldn't help but ask myself
 "why was he so harsh?"

Now I stand, just right here
 Down an empty hall

With someone's colloar in my fist,
 And his back against the wall

One side tells me to beat him up
 Because that's half the fun

But the other side screams
 "drop him! Just drop the kid and run!"

SO quickly I make a simple choice,
 As I lower him to the ground

I let him go and watch him run
 Because a new path I have found

         Written by [Moving on in Life]


Wherefore art thou, oh my love?
No one knows.
Except to say thou aren't at home.
I gasp then run;
'Tis as I feared;
Thou hadst spoken of thy death as it neared.
I run; I stumble, I trip and fall,
But knowing i must get to thee above all
Driveth me onward, maketh me take
Desperate measures to follow in thy wake.
I know where to find thee,
Thou explained it quite clear,
How to get from here to there.
And so I ran, with heart beating,
Legs flying, I ran to the place i knew thou i would'st find.
And find thee I did: thy silent deed was done:
Thou layest quite cold in a puddle of blood.
I threw myself down, pulled thee into my arms,
Crying and sobbing and kissing thee hard.
But nothing happened, twas all for naught:
Thy beautiful soul, Death's minions had caught.
I looked down at mine body, covered with thy own life,
Inspired by thought, I searched for the knife
That had stabbed my love's heart.
I clutched it, then whispered, "I come where thou art."
So saying, I plunged the knife deep.
A moment of pain, then I fell in a heap.
The last moments of my life, my end of the race,
But it was soon over and I was greeted by thy face.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Broken Mirror

I look into my mirror
And she stares back at me.
Long we glare at one another;
No end is close to see.

Who's eyes within this face are set?
Who's hair of golden hue?
Who's tears are these that stream
From eyes of darkest blue?

Who's face is this, so very sad?
Who's eyes with shadows wrought?
Who's brows now crease together
With every weary thought?

I smile at this stranger,
Conjured from out my mind.
To my surprise, she smiles back;
At least she has the time.

I laugh aloud, and so does she,
'Tis like we're both the same,
Soon I find myself wondering
'Does she maybe have a name?'

We start off simply looking,
And then we get to talking,
Soon, we do it everyday;
I before the mirror stalking.

I stare into the mirror;
But not her face I see:
Instead, there is a demon there,
Reaching out for me.

I try to run away,
But the demon from the mirror
Follows, grabbing for me,
Its hands are getting nearer.

I get a close up view of it,
And to my horror find
The face it wears upon its head
Is nothing less than mine!

Terrified beyond all words,
I look, and pray to find
Something with which to break
The mirror, left behind.

A book, it is my saviour!
I throw it at the glass,
The demon- now it shatters,
Upon the lively-hood of my past.

I fall with it to the floor,
I share this demon's pain.
Horrified, I realize
All my efforts were in vain:

The mirror held the image
Of what I had become.-
My mind now oh so broken-
My body begins to numb.

I stare blindly at the mirror,
Now shattered on the floor,
Millions of tiny images
Of what is never more.

            Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]


I stare into the mirror
Eyes of deep brown look back
Shadows pain in blood all behinde them
Like glass holding in an ocean
Of crimsion red and blue
No one knows what I've seen no not even you
I've told all my secrets and then a little more
But still you dont know what lies behinde the door
The door that leads into me
Like a rotten apple core
Slowly ripping apart my insides
Making me all torn
Cries and sobs escape me
In the darkest night
I think that I'm Alright
But we all know im not
Im destrought with thoughts of death
Losing my last breath
Horror pain and murder are in my little world
Twist and turning mixing together in a whirl
No one knows whats happening in my little mind
No one trys to find out by being oh so kind
As to cut open my head
Lay upon my corpse
Kill me on the bed
See the crimson blood ive shed
And whisper sweet words into my ear
Kiss away the tears from blank eyes staring
No one even caring
That as you pleasure your self
I'm already dead
On the inside no one sees
That im not who you think
I'm gone from this world
My body begans to stink
Try to wash me clean in your perfect porcelain sink
But my Hands wont wash clean of this blood
That you lowered on me
From a knife so keen to your senses
No one even saw
The terror in my eyes
But its ok
Because soon youll be found
And my body rest in peace

       Written by [Ego Diligo Tu]


Every morning I am thanking my stars
Feel so lucky having you in my arms
Wouldn't be the same without you,babe
There's not a thing about you I would change
I'm incomplete when you're far away
And when you're here,you make me whole again
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I foud someone who will make me say this and mean it.

Couldn't imagine life without you,
I want to wrap my arms around you
You're like a miracle in the month of March
I just want to kiss your face.

Sometimes I have to stop and stare
Might even run my fingers through your hair
Just to see that this is not a dream
I've got to see you smiling back at me
And I'm okay as long as you're okay
Don't have to ask, I know you feel the same
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I found someone who could make me say this and mean it.

       Written by [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]

Tribute to our Armed Forces

From Pearl Harbor
To Iraq

On us they
Haven't turned their back.

Fighting all night
And fighting all day

Struggling under fire
To keep hostiles at bay.

Fighting for freedom
to uphold all our rights.

Yet when they come home
They hide from "The Lights".

They don't ask for fortune
And they don't ask for fame

Because while they're out there
They all share the same name.

So this is my tribute
For Honor's the call

For the men and women
Who ask for nothing at all.

©2005 Brandon Aaron Bessman

Written by [Moving on in Life]

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2006-08-06 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *ignores ze brandon*

2006-08-06 [Moving on in Life]: *cries*

2006-08-06 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *dances naked*

2006-08-07 [Moving on in Life]: *passes out at all the nakedness*

2006-08-08 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *dances*

2006-08-09 [Moving on in Life]: *twitches*

2006-08-09 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pokes said twitchy man*

2006-08-10 [Moving on in Life]: *bites said poking finger*
RAWR! Never poke a twitching man!

2006-08-10 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *holds finger and cries in pain* owey

2006-08-10 [Moving on in Life]: *sits up* I told you. *cries vause he was poked*

2006-08-10 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits in corner*

2006-08-10 [Moving on in Life]: *burps*

2006-08-12 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *is skelton*

2006-08-12 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *puts hand on forhead*

2006-08-12 [Moving on in Life]: *stands up and dances the tango with a mall mannequin*

2006-08-13 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *is still skelton in corner, reads a book*

2006-08-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at the liz-who-is-skelton* whatcha readin?

2006-08-22 [Moving on in Life]: 42

2006-08-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: come again???

2006-08-22 [Moving on in Life]: I just threw out a guess as to what she was readign. And as we all know, 42 is the answer to life, the universe and everything.

2006-08-22 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs skelton bones* says jamies personal diary

2006-08-22 [Moving on in Life]: cool! Lemme read!

2006-08-22 [omgOMEGA]: 42 rocks. 42 is better than you.

2006-08-22 [Moving on in Life]: Indeed!

2006-08-22 [Moving on in Life]: 42 is better than us all

2006-08-22 [omgOMEGA]: yup

2006-08-22 [Moving on in Life]: *bows down before the Greatness of 42*

2006-08-22 [omgOMEGA]: yup

2006-08-23 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *places personal diary back in dimension bag and disapears the dimension bag until it is needed again* 42 *snorts derisively*

2006-08-23 [Moving on in Life]: *grinS*

2006-08-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *retreives a copy of the diary i had a dream about*looks shcoked* jamie you have sexual dreams about me??

2006-08-23 [Moving on in Life]: :O

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *holds up finger, sputters, puts finger down, sputters some more* Say WHAT???

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: Liar! She has sexual Fantasies about ME!

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks between the two, looking utterly confused and embarrassed*

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: Oh, you know oyu want the sexy body of this fat man...*licks the tips of his fingers and rubs his man-booby niples*

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *can't repress a snort of lauhter* you just sounded a lot like the Fat Bastard from Austin Powers...

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: LOL That was kind of my goal, sorta...ok, not really LOL

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at you in a confused, amused way* alrighty then...

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: lol I'm a loser

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: nah, you're funny, and well, liz likes to rape you right?

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: right! But why won't YOU rape me?

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *blinks* well...umm..i, want me to? cuz that wouldn't really be rape...i mean...liz might...get mad, or something...

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: Nah, Liz rapes everybody. She even raped my brother....

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *hides smile* yes, she is rather...uhm, violent with her passions isn't she? but to each his own, i suppose

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: Yeah.I try not to let her rape me after I witnessed THAT incident.. O_O;

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Why, afraid you'll get a disease? *laughs*

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: LOL naw.

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: well, why then? i mean, just bc he was ur bro or what???

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: Yep. He's my bro. THAT'S why

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Oh. I see, kinda...Yeah, I totally see...

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: YEah, It just ain't right.

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: very true...*shudders at the thoughts of ppl raping ppl*

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: *nods*

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *yawns* i know this is going to be a very random, and prolly bothersome question, but do you have a myspace?

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: Yep. but for some reason, I can't login tonight...

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ooo, that sucks...i've been on all night...doing nothing...

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: simple enough LOL

2006-08-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: simple???? and myspace is being...umm, a prick tonight...can't send messages, or add ppl...

2006-08-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *witnesses this feat and nods* good people

2006-08-24 [Moving on in Life]: You'll have to add me....

2006-08-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *places ze brandon and ze jamie in a locked room naked*

2006-08-25 [Moving on in Life]: Well, now...Ain't this a nice little situation we got into?

2006-08-26 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *sits on couch a hundred yards away a camera recording.* ebay here we come

2006-08-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *eyes go wide, screams, curls into a ball then becomes transparent*

2006-08-27 [Moving on in Life]: Oh, you're no fun. I wanna make the best of this!

2006-08-27 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *peaks out of ball* well...*tackles you*

2006-08-27 [Moving on in Life]: *grins, ready for anything she can dish out*

2006-08-27 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *straddles you, then leans over, ignoring liz's camera growls* ready for anything? *bites you lip gently*

2006-08-27 [Moving on in Life]: *grins and nibbles back* Yeah, anything *wink*

2006-08-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *puts head phones on and pets kiki*gonna be a long night kitty better make some ramen

2006-08-27 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *slowly leans back up* alright then...but first, a question: you don't happen to be slightly vampiric do you darlin?

2006-08-27 [Moving on in Life]: No, Not in the slightest. why?

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *pouts cutely* Oh well, that spoils that...*gets over it* I'll just have to think of something else. *traces your chest lightly with one fingertip, then presses chest against you while kissing your neck* I know you get better, but w/e, I'm not used to leading

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: Well, that solves the question of who's on top. *sits up and pushes you sfotly back* heh heh *grins all sexy-like* I'll make you one happy woman.

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *sighs contentedly* hoping you'd catch on...i don't really like being on top much...*lifts and eyebrow and smiles in a foxy way* it's a challenge then

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: *crawls on top of you, and snickers slyly*

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks up at you, not sure of what to expect* i hope liz is enjying this...

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: If you don't wanna, I don't mind. *he shrugs*

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *yawns and stretches hands above head* funny, i was thinking about asking you the same thing

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: I'm a guy. I'll do it whenever I get the chance. If both parties are willing and whatnot. But I can just as easily go without.

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs* spoken like a true and honest man. Nah, I'm willing, I"m just wondering what Liz is going to think. Goodness knows I could do with a bit of fun...

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: Well, let's give Liz a run for her money. She's a freak, so I'm sure we'd have a hard time making her NOT want to watch

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *giggles* Yes, let's! Good point...*looks up at you playfully* well, what was your snickering for before?

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: I dunno. just wanted to sound like I knew what I was doing.

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *bursts out laughing* So you don't really? Then that makes two of us. *subconsciously starts tracing your chest again* So, any ideas?

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: *Nibbles your ear* We'll figure it out as we go along.

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *moans through a smile* Ooo! *runs fingers down your sides* Got to find your hot-spot now...

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: *shudders* I'm ticklish, you know. *chuckles while your fingers run down my sides*

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *rolls eyes amusedly* ok, not there...oh well, there's always one that works...*leans forward to kiss you, nipping your lip lightly before slipping my tongue in there. runs hands up the insides of your legs*

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: Ooh, I'm liking that...(ok, this is gettin kinda freaky LOL)

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins at you* Yeah, thought you would *pauses in hand movement* freaky, as in, ok enough STOP freaky, or cool, freaky, i love it freaky?

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: Freaky as in It's FUCKIN WEIRD. I'm not used to Cyber Sex kinda shit LOL

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *falls out of chair laughing* well, don't tell anyone, but I just do it for fun, i get nothing but amusement out of it. i think liz's got quite a cam full anyway

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: lol I don't do it. I've done it twice, and said no more LOL Let's just stop. I'm just happy with the real thing LOL..except with a scare like I got.

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *nods* same here, on both accounts.*stretches then stands* thank you for your self-control, i have none so even if i want to stop, it's like a challenge, if that makes sense. i'm not happy with either, but all the better for me. *disappears, then reappears with clothes* i'll leave the sex stuff to liz from now on, i'm no good at it...

anyway, have you written anything new lately?

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: Always. They're all love poems and technically not complete yet. Once I re-write em in pen, then I'll tell ya about em.

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *pouts* Lucky...i've never been much good at those...oooo i can't wait!

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: I've got alot of other ones, but I'm not gonna post em til I get em pubished

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *stares off dreamily at the word published*

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: lol

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Seriously though, are you really gonna?

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: If I find the right publisher, yes.

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Wow. That's...uber cool. And I'm uber jealous.

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: And my girlfriend has a publisher she know who was gonna publish her book, but things happened, and My GF says she can hook me up with that same publisher.

2006-08-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *jaw drops* YOU LUCKY MONKEY!!!

2006-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: lol

2006-08-28 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *burst hysttericaly into laughter holding sides* oh my god...*laughs nore trying to control slef* oh ok i gotta stop*still chuckling slightly and lets you two out still laughing*

2006-08-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *blushed bright red all the way out to ears, then disappears all but eyes* liz, please don't put me in anymore naked-in-the-room-with-other-ppl situations...i do things i shouldn't...

2006-08-30 [Moving on in Life]: And I just don't do it.

2006-08-30 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *nods and tosesses you all clothes* yeah yeah*sits on couch with my kitty*

2006-08-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *ignores clothes, being already clothed, and sits in favorite recliner to read a book*

2006-08-31 [Moving on in Life]: *remains naked* I'm happy like this. I'm sure you ladies are, too *wink wink*

2006-08-31 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *looks down and laughs reaaly hard* oh god hehe did you just go swimming *laughs*

2006-08-31 [Moving on in Life]: Don't make me shoot you.

2006-09-01 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hands you a gun and spreads arm* take your best shot*

2006-09-02 [Moving on in Life]: Bang. *pulss trigger 97290834529803 times* ha ha you're dead.

2006-09-02 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *peices of body falls to floor and splatters on wall covering brandon in blood*

2006-09-02 [Moving on in Life]: *licks the blood off his lips* heh heh heh

2006-09-02 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *ish dead in peices*

2006-09-03 [Moving on in Life]: *cries*

2006-09-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *ish dead*

2006-09-03 [Moving on in Life]: *mourns*

2006-09-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *ish an angered spirit*

2006-09-03 [Moving on in Life]: *cackels at the angered spirit* What can you possibly do to me?

2006-09-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *gets men to rape you* kill me you bastard...

2006-09-03 [Moving on in Life]: AAAAAH! *dies from ass-rapage*

2006-09-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *angered sprit talks to your sprit* thats for killing me...

2006-09-03 [Moving on in Life]: *spirit talking* Well, it was still uncalled for...One man woulda been just fine. But MORE THAN ONE? WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!

2006-09-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: that you shot me in a million hurt my feelings..

2006-09-03 [Moving on in Life]: Oh, butI had fun. *goes back to his Man-raped body* I'm ALIVE!

2006-09-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *men still raping*

2006-09-03 [Moving on in Life]: *shoots the men 997890670968907 times so they can Ghost-Rape Liz*

2006-09-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *ghsot men stikc up noses cuz im a girl* well you could ghost raoe his body*they do so*

2006-09-03 [Moving on in Life]: *Ghost men are dead so I don't see of feel a thing*

2006-09-03 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *they rape you with a broom*

2006-09-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *covers eyes and laughs*

2006-09-04 [Moving on in Life]: *still doesn't feel a thing with ghost broom*

2006-09-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *starts dancing the tango with one of the ghost, cuz gay guys, even ghosts, are good at the tango*

2006-09-05 [Moving on in Life]: Oh, you are nasty

2006-09-06 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks around* Me?

2006-09-06 [Moving on in Life]: Yes. They're GAY guys

2006-09-06 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks up, then at you* Umm, yes? Straight guys don't dance. At least, none of the ones I know do.

2006-09-06 [Moving on in Life]: I dance. I'm straight. Not very good at, but I dance

2006-09-06 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shakes head*

2006-09-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *applauds* Rock on! You are respected. I'd still rather dance with gay guys though, cuz then I don't have to worry about the testosterone ;)

2006-09-08 [Moving on in Life]: Oh, you take the fun out of life. :P

2006-09-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *shrugs* If you say so. I'm not interested in the testosterone of unknown guys.

2006-09-08 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *glares at people and then just pouts*

2006-09-09 [Moving on in Life]: I'll be clean, I promise.

2006-09-09 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *lets liz dance with one of the gay guys in hopes of making her happy* You'll be clean? You want to dance, or somethin'?

2006-09-10 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *give gay guy a lesbian*

2006-09-10 [Moving on in Life]: *dances with you* I'll dance. :D

2006-09-10 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pouts*

2006-09-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *dances with brandon, then leans over and whispers in his ear* I think Liz wants someone to dance with, and she needs it more than me.

2006-09-11 [Moving on in Life]: She tried to have gay guys rape me last time, though. *whispering*

2006-09-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *chews lip, thinking about this, then whispers* Well, I"ll keep them distracted or something, and maybe if you're nice to her, she won't do it again. I dunno.

2006-09-11 [Moving on in Life]: good point. *goes to dacne with Liz, bein nice and everything*

2006-09-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *goes to distract the gay guys with more gay guys and gives them a room...or two, then sits back, closes eyes, and nods head with the music*

2006-09-11 [Moving on in Life]: She's not responding! *dances alone til Liz comes to*

2006-09-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *eyes still closed, smiles a little*

2006-09-11 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *attacks the brandon ripping out his heart and eats it*

2006-09-12 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *puts hand on forhead, sighs, then weaves a new heart for brandon out of magic* Liz...he was trying to be nice...*carefully places the heart back in brandon and heals him up, then places him in a protective bubble that neither liz, or anything she creates or gets can get through* I'm tired now, I'll see you later *disappears to a comfy waterbed*

2006-09-12 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *growls at ze brandon in his buble* hmmm ehhh ill be nice now*sleeps protectivly ontop of bubble*

2006-09-12 [Moving on in Life]: Ha ha...I can see up your dress in this bubble *grins* Now dance with me!

2006-09-13 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *chuckles in sleep, having a vision-dream of what you're doing*

2006-09-13 [tenshi-ryuu]: ...? weird time to walk into a convo :P

2006-09-13 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *gives up on sleep* Yeah, know, let kids be kids...

2006-09-13 [Moving on in Life]: Hey now. The bubble wasn't MY idea.

2006-09-13 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *awakes an looks around lazily and falls offf the bubble with a thud* ow..

2006-09-16 [Moving on in Life]: haha *points at Liz*

2006-09-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bats the bubble with a hand*

2006-09-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *snorts with laughter*

2006-09-17 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *Makes faces at brandon through the buble

2006-09-17 [Moving on in Life]: *makes bubble jiggle* haha! Jiggly bubble!

2006-09-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks then this appears/ <img:>
I made the pretty. ET messed it up some though

2006-09-18 [Moving on in Life]: *happy clap* GO [Bessman] and [Xenshu Bloodstone]!

2006-09-19 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *lays out on the floor on back and whimpers with eyes shut*

2006-09-19 [Moving on in Life]: *cuddles with you*

2006-09-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pokes jamie* jamie...whats wrong?

2006-09-19 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *mumbles something about sick and fluffy brown hair*

2006-09-19 [Moving on in Life]: Fluffy hair is good. Sick is bad

2006-09-19 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *nods*

2006-09-19 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *puts jamies fluffy hair into to two non frizzy pretty braids* there!*presses magic button so homemade soup and homemade itallin bread appears in front of the jamie*

2006-09-19 [Moving on in Life]: huh?

2006-09-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *doesn't have fluffy hair, but eats the yummy food anyway. mumbles through mouthful of bread* thanks liz

2006-09-21 [Moving on in Life]: *thinks Jamie is all better now*

2006-09-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *nods* just's J-A-I-M-E...

2006-09-22 [Moving on in Life]: ok. sorry :(

2006-09-22 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *inserts I in right place* Hi Jaime lol

2006-09-22 [Moving on in Life]: Yeah... SORRY JAIME!

2006-09-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles*

2006-09-24 [Moving on in Life]: lol

2006-09-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins widely* Thanks you guys...I feel loved now...there is only one person on earth who got my name right first try.

2006-09-26 [Moving on in Life]: I'm sorry :(

2006-09-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: No! Don't, really, like I said, almost no one gets it right first try. Or until I tell them. Totally ok, I"m used to it, makes me original. Just figured I'd tell you.

2006-09-26 [Moving on in Life]: ok ^_^

2006-09-26 [Ego Diligo Tu]: LOl true...I always wondered...but ehhhh

2006-09-27 [Moving on in Life]: lol...huh?

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