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2004-09-01 00:00:45
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Yoroshiku is "remember me" in Japanese (please correct me if im wrong!!!) Here's my story so far...PLEASE COMMENT! I appreciate constructive critisism! <poll:20153> PLEASE

     ~Yoroshiku~
Yoroshiku Chapter 1
Yoroshiku Chapter 2
Yoroshiku Chapter 3
Yoroshiku Chapter 4
Yoroshiku Chapter 5
Yoroshiku Chapter 6
Yoroshiku Chapter 7
Yoroshiku Chapter 8
Yoroshiku Chapter 9
Yoroshiku Chapter 10
Yoroshiku Chapter 11
Yoroshiku Chapter 12
Yoroshiku Chapter 13
Yoroshiku Chapter 14
Yoroshiku Chapter 15
Yoroshiku Chapter 16
Yoroshiku Chapter 17
Yoroshiku Chapter 18

~ Rachel Rabat ([Pianomay44])

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2004-03-29 [RavenTalon]: Wow! That's cool! Come here please! RavensUnitepage

2004-04-02 [Ceallach]: First of, major kudos on making the sentences flow at all times. Well done. There's one thing though, that would make this read even better: Names! It becomes so impersonal without 'em. All of them are just characters that talk, walk around or die. Give them names, they deserve that much ;)

2004-04-02 [Pianomay44]: Well, that's where the fun part is. The second chapter is 10 years in the future, and eventually you'll connect the people to their past.

2004-04-03 [RavenTalon]: Cool...great idea [Pianomay44]

2004-04-11 [Pianomay44]: why thank you. *bows*

2004-04-14 [Little Insane Cat]: I really liked to story, but sometimes I got a little lost. and I have to agrea with Ceallach, they need names!!

2004-04-15 [Pianomay44]: read the next chapter, they have names there! ^.^

2004-08-31 [Little Insane Cat]: you have to write more!!!

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