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hawthorne's WIP CRITIQUE

WIP = work in progress - I need feed back!
will put art up here for artist critiques when I have it to show
Ill always put up the newest update here
so you are encouraged to watch this page

Tsuki Bound!
it a running gag for years now
about what sort of bait should be used
to draw them to the trap and such

newest WIP stuff!

Sidekick name: The Bright Idea (muse as sidekick)
Strength: 2 physically 10 mentally
Superpower: Generates Inspiration Motivation and A General Lack of Attention to Common Sense Time or Mundane Obligations
Day Job: Unknown... where she disappears to Unknown
Background: Unknown... maybe created from leftovers at the begining of time itself
Hero She Works For: Alot! she is a real scamp and gets arould to many artists mothers
and anyone else who has ever spoken the words, "Another fine mess You've gotten me into!"
Yup every hero needs someone who gets him into trouble...

I had a great idea for the Valentine Art Competition

too bad I CANT enter it
it be me and Aodh together kissing
me as a photo... in other words real life...
and Aodh as a digital painting...

the theme is Forbidden Love

Forbidden b/c
1... we exist in two separate mediums...
and 2... b/c he is my alter ego...

I CANT enter it b/c...


Since the winners will be featured on Mainstreet, images that depict graphic violence, pornography or other disturbing actions will not be accepted. Only images that fit the theme will be allowed.

All mediums, except photography (and/or manipulations) and animated GIF's, will be accepted.

I love the idea of real world meets painted world..
me and Aodh meeting... and the reasons why its forbidden...

but ET doesnt


going to use this painting
of C'serio © Lanisaz [will be replaced by me]
and Aodh & art © moira hawthorne.
here is the photo-reference I used
<img0*300:stuff/WIP%20CA%20colour%2014.jpg> * <img0*300:stuff/P1280023.JPG> * <img0*300:stuff/forbidden%20Val%20wip1.png>
this still needs alot of work...
or I may get a better... in proportion photo taken

ok new photo of me... with better proportions to match Aodh
plus the colours are better
and you can see I decided to fade Aodh abit... as if he is more imaginary than real
got to fill in parts of Aodh's body that have/had C'serio

Im entered in the ET Dark Arts Competition
in the art category ET Dark Arts entries

I reworked a painting of mine... its an old fav... but I never did think it was quite finished... what you think?

<img0*200:stuff/twin%20captive%20moon.jpg> * <img0*200:stuff/twin%20captive%20moon%20dark%20art.png> * <img0*200:stuff/twin%20captive%20skull%20moon%20dark%20art.png>

added another skull
im not sure if its done now...
im tempted to add flames but that might be to much ..what you say?
I think I likes!

'Fate's Dark Balance'

[moira hawthorne]'s wip wikis
hawthorne's WIP CRITIQUE - current WIP wiki
hawthorne's WIP basement - older WIP wiki incomplete art
hawthorne's Recent Art & WIP - older WIP wiki some incomplete some finished art
hawthorne's snow ice and sun photos - photo refer wip wiki
- need to ask for password if interested... sorry its exported I need this
hawthorne's BD gift to Gato - my newest wip wiki
mhss08 wipcritique - finished art with the WIP process
Fae on Catwhisker WIP wiki - finished art with the WIP process
coffee painting - finished art with the WIP process
hawthorne's Recent ArtGiftsPhotos - empty at the moment
Show your WIPs - a collection of ET artists WIP wikis
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2005-11-22 [Linn Scarlett]: and even worse: chest hair grows where it doesnt belong! its like, the middle between the breast, then the top ish near collar bones towards shoulders and at the bottom of the chest towards nipples. but (usually) not the middle area *hopes that you get what i mean* and it certainly doesnt grow all the way over the stomac X_X only a bitt under breasts then if you get lucky in a straight thin but visible line down ot his ehh parts :P

2005-11-22 [moira hawthorne]: well other then he is furred... he is a nice guy!

2005-11-22 [moira hawthorne]: im trying... I have so many Im suoppose to be doing.. long projects.. than it seems Im always starting a new one.. but most thes quicky projects... just cause its all I have time for... like the new one for Heartless on my house... I did that last night... but I still haveny finish these or ladis...

2005-11-22 [Linn Scarlett]: yea i know. i often sketch and then start a new one :( sides i hardly have time for my social life, let alone my private life

2005-11-22 [moira hawthorne]: need more time and more of me.. 5 would be nice..

2005-11-22 [Linn Scarlett]: i need time in general

2005-11-22 [moira hawthorne]: *pets*... okay let RP some .. too stress relief...

2006-08-25 [Estantia]: I like the Aodh in a tree pic, however something with the scale keeps making me think he's tiny, it might be that the leaves appear too far back or too big for the distance, maybe some other branches iwth some leaves covering would help *no idea*

2006-08-25 [moira hawthorne]: hummmmmm ... yes the background leaves could of been smaller... or some smaller... but its a big ass old tree.. and I have seen maples with leaves bigger than my hands together...

there will be more branches with more leaves before it is finished..

2006-08-25 [Estantia]: that should clear it up then, that's why I wasn't sure on leaf size.

2006-08-25 [moira hawthorne]: he still may end up lookin small tho... dont know.. matter of opinion... maybe blaim it on faery magic.. or big ass old maple tree...

2006-08-26 [Kuehne]: Wow.. the coffee art looks wonderful. Maybe I should try it sometime.

2006-08-26 [moira hawthorne]: yes! try it... I just hope it scans well in the end...

2006-08-27 [Dark Side of the Moon]: Your coffee painting looks awesome!!! I'd like to give that a shot, but I'm afraid I'd drink the paint.

2006-08-27 [moira hawthorne]: hehehehe I used cheep instant coffee... so there was much of a pull to drink it... my own coffee is much better!

2006-09-04 [jsun]: Moira your coffee painting is like SO Bad ASS!

2006-09-04 [moira hawthorne]: THX U VERY MUCH... LOTS OF FUN TO DO

2006-09-06 [Sahraminkukka]: Bwee, I bet your room smells nice after placing the coffee painting in it ;)

2006-09-06 [moira hawthorne]: ya smells really great ..taste horrid..

2006-09-07 [jsun]: Your newest WIP is looking really good so far Moira! :)

2006-09-07 [moira hawthorne]: there are a few things that are bothering me tho... like C'serio's neck... since in the reference photo there was fuzzy hair there... and his arm... can you help me ?

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