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hawthorne's WIP CRITIQUE

WIP = work in progress - I need feed back!
will put art up here for artist critiques when I have it to show
Ill always put up the newest update here
so you are encouraged to watch this page

Tsuki Bound!
it a running gag for years now
about what sort of bait should be used
to draw them to the trap and such

newest WIP stuff!

Sidekick name: The Bright Idea (muse as sidekick)
Strength: 2 physically 10 mentally
Superpower: Generates Inspiration Motivation and A General Lack of Attention to Common Sense Time or Mundane Obligations
Day Job: Unknown... where she disappears to Unknown
Background: Unknown... maybe created from leftovers at the begining of time itself
Hero She Works For: Alot! she is a real scamp and gets arould to many artists mothers
and anyone else who has ever spoken the words, "Another fine mess You've gotten me into!"
Yup every hero needs someone who gets him into trouble...

I had a great idea for the Valentine Art Competition

too bad I CANT enter it
it be me and Aodh together kissing
me as a photo... in other words real life...
and Aodh as a digital painting...

the theme is Forbidden Love

Forbidden b/c
1... we exist in two separate mediums...
and 2... b/c he is my alter ego...

I CANT enter it b/c...


Since the winners will be featured on Mainstreet, images that depict graphic violence, pornography or other disturbing actions will not be accepted. Only images that fit the theme will be allowed.

All mediums, except photography (and/or manipulations) and animated GIF's, will be accepted.

I love the idea of real world meets painted world..
me and Aodh meeting... and the reasons why its forbidden...

but ET doesnt


going to use this painting
of C'serio © Lanisaz [will be replaced by me]
and Aodh & art © moira hawthorne.
here is the photo-reference I used
<img0*300:stuff/WIP%20CA%20colour%2014.jpg> * <img0*300:stuff/P1280023.JPG> * <img0*300:stuff/forbidden%20Val%20wip1.png>
this still needs alot of work...
or I may get a better... in proportion photo taken

ok new photo of me... with better proportions to match Aodh
plus the colours are better
and you can see I decided to fade Aodh abit... as if he is more imaginary than real
got to fill in parts of Aodh's body that have/had C'serio

Im entered in the ET Dark Arts Competition
in the art category ET Dark Arts entries

I reworked a painting of mine... its an old fav... but I never did think it was quite finished... what you think?

<img0*200:stuff/twin%20captive%20moon.jpg> * <img0*200:stuff/twin%20captive%20moon%20dark%20art.png> * <img0*200:stuff/twin%20captive%20skull%20moon%20dark%20art.png>

added another skull
im not sure if its done now...
im tempted to add flames but that might be to much ..what you say?
I think I likes!

'Fate's Dark Balance'

[moira hawthorne]'s wip wikis
hawthorne's WIP CRITIQUE - current WIP wiki
hawthorne's WIP basement - older WIP wiki incomplete art
hawthorne's Recent Art & WIP - older WIP wiki some incomplete some finished art
hawthorne's snow ice and sun photos - photo refer wip wiki
- need to ask for password if interested... sorry its exported I need this
hawthorne's BD gift to Gato - my newest wip wiki
mhss08 wipcritique - finished art with the WIP process
Fae on Catwhisker WIP wiki - finished art with the WIP process
coffee painting - finished art with the WIP process
hawthorne's Recent ArtGiftsPhotos - empty at the moment
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2005-10-25 [moira hawthorne]: I havent figured out his full story... i just got him named... I think he use to be a first boy... of some importance ..but what he did that caused him to be curse to be a drider I dont know... yet... his Mistress now... just likes abusing him.. and bondage gear keeps his from rebeling too... she doesnt want her slave getting ideas... as long as he cant eat or free his arms... she also whips him..

2005-10-25 [Estantia]: that's mean, but here's a bit on contsructive crit, "is there any way you could clean the legs up? some bits are not entriely inside the legs, that is unless it's meant to lok like that..."

2005-10-25 [moira hawthorne]: well its half my style.. and half I got lazy by the time I was drawing his legs... this isnt gonna be the pose I use.. this is a character sketch just to develop him... as a character... I wanted work more on his harness and the reins and gear and such that he pulls the chariot...

2005-10-25 [moira hawthorne]: Im gonna have to get some reference for his legs... how they attach to the hips and where they would be positioned...

2005-10-25 [Linn Scarlett]: i like the way he looks now :p maybe you cvould blindfold him too

2005-10-25 [moira hawthorne]: would you blind fold your horse?

2005-10-25 [Linn Scarlett]: yea

2005-10-25 [Linn Scarlett]: you can steer it

2005-10-25 [moira hawthorne]: I still rather not have a blind horse... he stumble and well a whip is great accentive..

2005-10-26 [Forever Equine]: Most of the time a blind folded horse would be too scared to move but if a whip got after him he might. I'm liking the way it's coming out although where is his forearm?

2005-10-26 [moira hawthorne]: you can lead a blindfolded horse... during a fire its better to blind folf them.. and blinder.. blocking out some side vision is useful to some horses.. for traffic and stuff... or racing... but not for a war horse... his forearms are crossed and tied behind hid back

2005-10-26 [Linn Scarlett]: oh and tied arms are handy? ;P what if he trips

2005-10-26 [moira hawthorne]: he has 8 legs?.. really dont think he needs them.. If he has well behaved he could have use of his arms... but he keeps trying to kill his Mistress...

2005-10-30 [Linn Scarlett]: ohh cool the kelpie ^_^

2005-10-30 [moira hawthorne]: hahah... i had to do one for Samhain!... tho i cant clean it up or finish it before... very busy here...

2005-10-30 [moira hawthorne]: no kidding... I have about a million things to do.. and get dinner!

2005-10-30 [moira hawthorne]: aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! candy has attacked my 4 yr old!

2005-11-18 [Lordterrex]: TERREX IS DA SHIT!!!... heh.. hes soo cool...

2005-11-21 [moira hawthorne]: oh that was a gift.. and its finished now so it been my permanent art wiki... I did 3 versions... 2 finish and one incompleat...but he chosse the one he liked and he didnt like the second one .. so I scaped it... .. if you want to see it it is on his home...

2005-11-21 [moira hawthorne]: thx U...

2005-11-22 [Linn Scarlett]: and even worse: chest hair grows where it doesnt belong! its like, the middle between the breast, then the top ish near collar bones towards shoulders and at the bottom of the chest towards nipples. but (usually) not the middle area *hopes that you get what i mean* and it certainly doesnt grow all the way over the stomac X_X only a bitt under breasts then if you get lucky in a straight thin but visible line down ot his ehh parts :P

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