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2009-02-23 04:11:24
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Here are pages 29-36 of Pilgrim chapter 1, an online comic about a young woman who wakes in a strange world without any prophesies, epic questing, or world-saving to do. - comic
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2009-02-23 [Elwyne]: ooh more!!! Looking good!

2009-02-23 [stuffAEAmade]: thank you :)

2009-02-23 [Elwyne]: <img:44166_1164145221.gif>

2009-02-23 [Dint]: Looking forward to more updates!

2009-02-23 [Yncke]: Verrry nice. I agree with [Dint]!

2009-02-23 [deeterhi]: I'm a little confused about what happened on page 31 on the second panel. I'm not sure what I'm looking at.

The rest is lovely as usual.

2009-02-23 [stuffAEAmade]: Ah, that's the stool Rae was sitting on. It got knocked over when she jumped up. Not too clear, is it?

Thanks guys :)

2009-02-24 [deeterhi]: oh, see I thought something happened to the table. Maybe the panel would work better if it wasn't such a close-up and we could see Rae stumbling off of it (just a suggestion:) )

2009-02-24 [stuffAEAmade]: Yes, it would. I'll keep that in mind for future scenes, thanks. :)

2009-02-25 [Zab]: yay more pages :D

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